Sumi H. Inkblot

Thank you all for a very warm welcome! :) Ah yes! It was a bit difficult on my tiny netbook, but with a mouse it's better. Just from looking around ...

(I do know there's a Welcome Back thread, and I'll post there if this is the wrong place. Err.) Hello all! It's been quite a while since my last posting ...

I'm not quite sure how I feel about this poem, to be honest. XD It's an interesting idea, but the angle is a little bit weird. I think that the ...

Well! Lol. My first major impression is that of the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" with Will Ferrell -- the style of narration is very similar. Narration It's quite amusing, actually, ...

I was snoozing in science class when the teacher was taking us through how to name different types of atomic bonds. So he points to "CO2" (which is totally next ...

Okay, nominative is when the noun acts, and accusative is when the noun is "acted upon"? So... "I bought((buy...we haven't gotten to tenses yet)) books for you (all)" is "Ich ...

I have a test coming up on nominative and accusative forms of pronouns (ich, du, er/sie/es, otherwise known as I, you, he/she/it). According to the omniscient textbook, you change things ...

Ooh, Twitty. I'm enjoying this. In advance: Chuck a PM my way when/if you post the next chapter. ^_^ Shadow Tattybogle was quite certain of two things. Firstly, Mistress had ...

Quick, someone! This is great story material! Dibs!

Hey Galerius! Are you really ten? Ten-year-olds don't write like this. XD Is the "due" in stanza I, line iii supposed to be "dew" (the stuff you find on leaves ...

Hi. I'm Max. I was looking for random writing tips and I tripped over this one. It seemed interesting... so here I am. I write, lots of fiction. No fantasy ...

Golden light whispered through crisp leaves and quietly baptised the ground beneath them Wind whispers, and they dance in morning dew Celebrating a life long past. The children congregate and ...

My first complaint about this poem is that it's a lot like your "Center" poem, with the same type of repeating meter (2/3/2/3) and rhyme scheme (a/b/c/b). It just gets ...

Golden light whispered through crisp leaves and quietly baptised the ground beneath them Wind whispers, and they dance in morning dew Celebrating a life long past. The children congregate and ...

Well, that depends on what genre you're using. For romance, using anything overly frilly (like Louise, Marie, almost anything French-sounding) is generally a bad idea. For fantasy, that's really based